Great review.
"Like a child in a toy shop, the game never stops thrusting things in front of you for you to look at."
This doesn't quite make sense due to the order, I think. As is, it implies the child is doing the thrusting, and not the toy shop. Unless you mean the child thrusting toys in front of a parent. That's a bit of a reach as phrased currently.
Maybe avoid using thrusting and child in the same sentence altogether.
"Like a child in a toy shop, the game never stops thrusting things in front of you for you to look at."
This doesn't quite make sense due to the order, I think. As is, it implies the child is doing the thrusting, and not the toy shop. Unless you mean the child thrusting toys in front of a parent. That's a bit of a reach as phrased currently.
Maybe avoid using thrusting and child in the same sentence altogether.
