This seems a little lazier than most of your reviews, Jace. It doesn't flow as well as most and there are some grammar things that you usually catch in other people's reviews, like repeated words in sentences and some weird stopping points.
But I like the story-telling approach you took here and the casual tone you set early on.
But I like the story-telling approach you took here and the casual tone you set early on.
Note to gamers: when someone shoots you in the face, they aren't "gay." They are "psychopathic."
