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willthegreat's Multiwinia: Survival of the Flattest review

Feedback on WilltheGreat's Multiwinia: Survival of the Flattest review. 12 replies.

Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
I say, William, this review is simply marvelous, your best work yet! How do you do it?
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
Oh, you are too kind, sir, too kind. While I am proud of this particular work, and I do appreciate your feedback, I would hardly call it my best.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
Don't be so modest, Will, this is good stuff.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008 edited
Why thanks, Will. It's always nice to get comments from people who read my reviews.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
Excellent review, Will. Easy to read and very informative.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
Thanks, nice to know my work is appreciated. :)
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
Eh, this review was well-written, but it's not up to your usual standards. Could have been a little more detailed in parts, I think, like when talking about tactics in the middle bit.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008 edited
I suppose. I tried to give as much detail as I could without bogging it down, but I didn't want to force it. Appreciate the honest feedback. ;)
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
lawl, dis review sux
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
...I suppose it's better to have bad feedback than no feedback at all.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Will Roy Freelancer Dec 10, 2008
Dude, why are you spending a whole topic talking to yourself?
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe
Lewis Denby Dec 10, 2008 edited
...Anyway.

The start of this doesn't sit nicely at all with me, I'm afraid. It's better than your original version that I talked about on the staff board, but your alteration manages to add a level of arrogance. "I gather it's a sequel but I don't care" - or whatever you wrote - just sounds like an admittance that you can't be bothered to research your material properly, and claiming that "a novel idea is still a novel idea" just doesn't seem to make much sense. How many times does that novel idea have to be repeated until that novelty wears off?

It's still a good review, though, having said all that.
Wolf Queen Dec 10, 2008
XD I love you, Will.

I told you I liked this review, though. Probably one of my favorites from you.
[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will

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