Takes a lot to make an interesting read for a game that volumes have been written about, but you got what it takes. Really captures the feel of the game, which is a worthwhile approach since everyone knows the mechanics of Doom by now. Incidentally, I think you might enjoy watching the Doom mod videos by Marveller, who also has a pretty fun (if roudy) Discord group. Check it out sometime if you'd like some new adventures in this iconic setting!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hY4UGtGzFgk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hY4UGtGzFgk
