Wonderful writing. It was always going to be too pat, but the opening paragraph is excellent, and the closing stanza was funny and apt. Good to see a game tackle heavy issues, and good to see us cover those games.
I have some suggestions, but I'm too lazy to set them out here.
I have some suggestions, but I'm too lazy to set them out here.
I don't have to prove I'm refined - that's what makes me refined!
