wolfqueen001's Lylian: Episode 1: Paranoid Friendship review

Nice job, Leslie.

Although the last sentence (fragment) of the penultimate paragraph appears to make no sense:

"All of which barely even touched upon."

Ah. Taken out of context, that sentence does look a bit awkward. I did intend it to be a fragment, though, as it was supposed to explain that the elements described in the previous sentence don't have a lot of... weight, I guess, since the game is so short.

Anyway, thanks! Glad you liked it. ...aside from that sentence. haha.

EDIT: Fixed. Thanks, Marc.