This was an excellent review, but got bounced out of the running in ROTW for two small criticisms:
1) The first paragraph implies that this game is a sequel to Limbo, when it actually is not,
2) The first sentence of the last paragraph is inaccurate, as there are plenty of people, like myself, who have never played Limbo and don't care either way.
This review was a top contender in all other respects. It has great flow, flawless application of punctuation, etc. I actually thought that the quality of the writing was a tiny cut above the ponies review and it made me sad that I had to bounce it out of the running. In any other week it would have easily been a contender for first place.
Sigh. What a week.
1) The first paragraph implies that this game is a sequel to Limbo, when it actually is not,
2) The first sentence of the last paragraph is inaccurate, as there are plenty of people, like myself, who have never played Limbo and don't care either way.
This review was a top contender in all other respects. It has great flow, flawless application of punctuation, etc. I actually thought that the quality of the writing was a tiny cut above the ponies review and it made me sad that I had to bounce it out of the running. In any other week it would have easily been a contender for first place.
Sigh. What a week.
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