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Marc Golding Staff Nov 11, 2013
Nice little review, Gary. I did have problem processing the first paragraph though. It could be that I'm exhausted and would have problems reading my name at this point, but it could also be that it's worded a bit funny for my Canadian sensibilities. Give it a re-read and see if I'm just losing it.
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Gary Hartley Staff Nov 13, 2013
I've played about with the phrasing for the first paragraph a bit, and swapped out some words. Hopefully it will read better to sleepy Canadians. The rest of the world is just gravy.

Thanks, Marc.
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