Some nitpicky typos in an otherwise good review. I may have more after the TT results, which I'm not done with yet, and this won't affect my vote. I just wanted to write this up for RotW stuff and in case you wanted to proofread.
come crashing sown (sown->down)
pump led into gas trucks (led->lead)
are a bit too open than they should (too->more)
Alicia’s satanic magic + Alicia stands to exorcise the minions of SATAN = contradiction? She's not killing Satan with his own magic I think...
That's about it and it's not much.
come crashing sown (sown->down)
pump led into gas trucks (led->lead)
are a bit too open than they should (too->more)
Alicia’s satanic magic + Alicia stands to exorcise the minions of SATAN = contradiction? She's not killing Satan with his own magic I think...
That's about it and it's not much.
My principal said, 'Emo, Emo, Emo.'
I said 'I'm the one in the middle, you lousy drunk!'
-- Emo Phillips
I said 'I'm the one in the middle, you lousy drunk!'
-- Emo Phillips

