Opinion follows:
You seem to like the game a lot :)
This is a very good sentence:
"Though time has passed in our reality, the two episodes weave their stories through the same timeline that Grand Theft Auto IV protagonist Niko Bellic inhabited, giving players the opportunity to explore the storyline from new perspectives."
Both a good sentence, and an explanation of how the story-telling happens. I wish you had tied this up to the.. retrospective style of the review, and maybe the references to the game-engine mechanics - a little more directly (..even if I have no idea how that could be done). Could maybe have used that as a framing device for mentioning it's a.. standalone expansion pack release for new and old fans of earlier GTA games, that kind of thing..
Like the review, though.
(Niggles:
"I had a lot of fun with most of the missions"
-might be good to avoid switching viewpoint in the middle of the text like that. Write "The missions are entertaining", or "I decree the missions to be objectively fun". Else you might want to make it clear that "even if /I/ had fun with the missions, misers might not...", or that "I had fun with most of the missions because of.... ..but there are problems such as..".)
You seem to like the game a lot :)
This is a very good sentence:
"Though time has passed in our reality, the two episodes weave their stories through the same timeline that Grand Theft Auto IV protagonist Niko Bellic inhabited, giving players the opportunity to explore the storyline from new perspectives."
Both a good sentence, and an explanation of how the story-telling happens. I wish you had tied this up to the.. retrospective style of the review, and maybe the references to the game-engine mechanics - a little more directly (..even if I have no idea how that could be done). Could maybe have used that as a framing device for mentioning it's a.. standalone expansion pack release for new and old fans of earlier GTA games, that kind of thing..
Like the review, though.
(Niggles:
"I had a lot of fun with most of the missions"
-might be good to avoid switching viewpoint in the middle of the text like that. Write "The missions are entertaining", or "I decree the missions to be objectively fun". Else you might want to make it clear that "even if /I/ had fun with the missions, misers might not...", or that "I had fun with most of the missions because of.... ..but there are problems such as..".)
