I swear: if you derail my 5/5 streak with a bloody smurf's review, I'll hunt you down and bludgoen you.
Sad fact is, this is a good enough review to do it.
Sad fact is, this is a good enough review to do it.
For us. For them. For you.
JoeTheDestroyer's The Smurfs Dance Party review
:D laughed pretty hard a few times. Did that.
"a title with more substance". This one needs a bit more sarcasm. ..I mean, seriously, needs to be obvious. Otherwise it looks as if you're deliberately addressing teens. Instead of grown-ups who giggle a lot and change diapers with a smile for the time being, etc. :p
And the end of the first paragraph.. "The threat of embarrassment.." - maybe "But the threat of embarrassment.."? You know, ending with a solid statement. Could... even smuggle a semicolon in there..?
"a title with more substance". This one needs a bit more sarcasm. ..I mean, seriously, needs to be obvious. Otherwise it looks as if you're deliberately addressing teens. Instead of grown-ups who giggle a lot and change diapers with a smile for the time being, etc. :p
And the end of the first paragraph.. "The threat of embarrassment.." - maybe "But the threat of embarrassment.."? You know, ending with a solid statement. Could... even smuggle a semicolon in there..?
Will the savage blue creatures sabotage Mr. Hartley's five victory streak? It's intrigue! It's excitement! Tune in for the next Review of the Week!
And thanks, Gary! I look forward to that bludgeoning.
Thanks, fleinn. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
And thanks, Gary! I look forward to that bludgeoning.
Thanks, fleinn. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
The only thing my milkshake brings to the yard is a subpoena.
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