This is a great review and exactly what I was hoping for when I sent you the game. Your attention to the differences between last year's game and this year's game, as well as your assessment of that value, was especially appreciated. The description of how grit affects play also was handled very well. Overall, the review was easy to read, understand and enjoy.
Here's a sentence that I think you'll want one of us to change, though:
But unless you’re reading this review in your Detroit Red Wings pajamas (sadly, mine are too small for me now), an upgrade from 09 may not be a wasteful and unnecessary move.
This seems to be saying the opposite of what you intend for it to say. I think you mean "an upgrade from 09 may be a wasteful..." instead of "an upgrade from 09 may not be a wasteful..." in that sentence. If you'd like the "not" removed, just give the word and I'll tend to it.
"Too often we enjoy the comfort of opinion without the discomfort of thought." - John F. Kennedy on reality
"What if everything you see is more than what you see--the person next to you is a warrior and the space that appears empty is a secret door to another world? What if something appears that shouldn't? You either dismiss it, or you accept that there is much more to the world than you think. Perhaps it really is a doorway, and if you choose to go inside, you'll find many unexpected things." - Shigeru Miyamoto on secret doors to another world
