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Lewis's The Nameless Mod review

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Jonathan Stark Mar 24, 2009
Another analytical masterpiece from Lewis. My only trouble with this one is that it seems you got a bit lazy at times, and could've afforded to redraft this to just tighten some of the grammatical screws. For instance, you say the "resoundingly good" phrase a couple times, and neither useage is particularly effective for the amount of emotion you'd been pouring into the review.
Note to gamers: when someone shoots you in the face, they aren't "gay." They are "psychopathic."
Lewis Denby Mar 24, 2009 edited
I'll have a glance at that and get EmP to edit. I wrote this over a period of a few days - sometimes that leads to sloppier work than rush-writing!

Fanx 4 readin'

EDIT: I did not use that phrase even once. ¬_¬

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