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By Donovan Chee · July 16, 2007

I took down my FFXII review and patched it up; added some things and took many others away.

It lost a lot of length in the process, but I feel a lot better for correcting the pace, structure and above all - run on sentences.

Hopefully.

I still have trouble.

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You guys should give me dating advice.
Serious.

Comments 9

Genj Jul 16, 2007

Talk about how you love fixing things and commitment.

Edit - Oh, and changing yourself.

carcinogen_crush Blogger Jul 16, 2007

You remain the master.

Genj Jul 16, 2007

It's the Prince avatar.

Felix_Arabia Jul 16, 2007

Tell her you think she's the most beautiful girl in the world.

carcinogen_crush Blogger Jul 16, 2007

Nah, I tried that before and I was only hurting myself.

My problem is getting dates.

I'm all, "Would you like to-"

And then they never talk to me again, or materialize this magical boyfriend that they've failed to mention in the past two months of leading you on.

Damn.

Are any of you guys married?

Felix_Arabia Jul 17, 2007

I feel like I'm married to EmP.

carcinogen_crush Blogger Jul 17, 2007

That counts; it does.

I think you two are beautiful in your homo-eroticness.

Teshon44 Aug 23, 2007