ah i've been reworking that entire first paragraph chiseling away the clutter and adding more and so on. anyway, i'll keep that under wraps for now until i'm ready to submit. meanwhile i'd like some more feedback on what i've made available so far. i've spent several hours already on that paragraph alone and who knows how many hours i spent sitting there just thinking. i wonder how long it takes you guys to plan and write reviews.

i need a damn shower.