Here’s an awkward sentence - These missions reward players with exclusive items that aren’t available in the main game, but it’s a shame they couldn’t have been better integrated into the main game
You say main game too much. But there’s not a lot else to complain about overall. There’s a sense of assumed familiarity on your behalf wherein you expect the reader to already know about the series, which falls a bit flat because though I own a few of the games, I’ve yet to sink a single minute in (but one day, right?). Still, good work putting over what parts of a faux-MMO works and which parts either fall flat to stick too close to the source for their own good.
You say main game too much. But there’s not a lot else to complain about overall. There’s a sense of assumed familiarity on your behalf wherein you expect the reader to already know about the series, which falls a bit flat because though I own a few of the games, I’ve yet to sink a single minute in (but one day, right?). Still, good work putting over what parts of a faux-MMO works and which parts either fall flat to stick too close to the source for their own good.
For us. For them. For you.