A very good review.
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Good call by mentioning early how the game changes depending on how the player responds to the psychological profile. You explained just enough about that feature to keep me interested in the review. That served as an effective springboard into the rest of the review.
While I like all the information you provide, the review reads like a sectioned review without the sections. Try to work the graphics and sounds more seamlessly into the review. I also don't quite understand the argument about how the two game play modes are too different. Since the nightmare modes can be so unforgiving, wouldn't you want a moment of relaxations here and there? Also, please work on your conclusion. You summarize some points then throw in some new info about game length and whatnot. Again, try to work that into the body more casually.
With all that said, I think this is a solid review that could be great with some structural work.
While I like all the information you provide, the review reads like a sectioned review without the sections. Try to work the graphics and sounds more seamlessly into the review. I also don't quite understand the argument about how the two game play modes are too different. Since the nightmare modes can be so unforgiving, wouldn't you want a moment of relaxations here and there? Also, please work on your conclusion. You summarize some points then throw in some new info about game length and whatnot. Again, try to work that into the body more casually.
With all that said, I think this is a solid review that could be great with some structural work.
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