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ManOWarr's Defense Grid: The Awakening (XLA) review

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zippdementia Sep 11, 2009
Not a bad review. You really don't need the headers (BOTTOM LINE, GAMEPLAY, FUN, etc.) to get your point across. I would remove them and just use transitions to pull these paragraphs together.
Note to gamers: when someone shoots you in the face, they aren't "gay." They are "psychopathic."
ManOWarr Sep 12, 2009
I tried something different with this review by organizing sections of it, and being to-the-point. It was an experiment that I had fun with, but I'll just stick to making a straight up review from here on out. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
I think of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?"

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