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"Words Unsung" - Haiku

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Best friends for two lines
Laughing down the darkened hall
Carefully unheard

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beverage Oct 25, 2005

... you like powetry a lot don't you

ive also noticed a pattern in your poems... its hard to find the right word to describe it though.

draqq_zyxx Blogger Oct 25, 2005

Hopefully, it's "poignant" or "lyrical".

bluberry Oct 25, 2005

I like to eat cake
Cut through chocolate frosting
Mmmm, cake

beverage Oct 27, 2005

i like blubery's lol...

no those are not the words. It's your style. I can't find the word to it. But it can be found in lots of different types of things like if you listem to P.O.D. music a lot you see the same pattern in the lyrics style. It has nothing to do with rhyme. It your words and how you use them and the subject of your poems.