(Untitled Post)
November 09, 2009

Time can be cruel. The world; its future and the perception of those in it can change accordingly for better or worse, given time.

does it read awkwardly or is there a better way to restructure this sentence?

Most recent blog posts from Jason Lew...

Feedback
wolfqueen001 wolfqueen001 - November 09, 2009 (10:45 PM)
Given time, the world, its future and the perception of those in it can change for better or worse.
jiggs jiggs - November 09, 2009 (11:36 PM)
thumbsup
radicaldreamer radicaldreamer - November 10, 2009 (02:39 AM)
Comma instead of semicolon.

eXTReMe Tracker
© 1998-2025 HonestGamers
None of the material contained within this site may be reproduced in any conceivable fashion without permission from the author(s) of said material. This site is not sponsored or endorsed by Nintendo, Sega, Sony, Microsoft, or any other such party. Opinions expressed on this site do not necessarily represent the opinion of site staff or sponsors.