I took down my FFXII review and patched it up; added some things and took many others away.

It lost a lot of length in the process, but I feel a lot better for correcting the pace, structure and above all - run on sentences.

Hopefully.

I still have trouble.

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You guys should give me dating advice.
Serious.

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	Genj - July 16, 2007 (08:15 PM) Talk about how you love fixing things and commitment. Edit - Oh, and changing yourself.
	carcinogen_crush - July 16, 2007 (09:14 PM) You remain the master.
	Genj - July 16, 2007 (09:31 PM) It's the Prince avatar.
	Felix_Arabia - July 16, 2007 (10:21 PM) Tell her you think she's the most beautiful girl in the world.
	carcinogen_crush - July 16, 2007 (11:14 PM) Nah, I tried that before and I was only hurting myself. My problem is getting dates. I'm all, "Would you like to-" And then they never talk to me again, or materialize this magical boyfriend that they've failed to mention in the past two months of leading you on. Damn. Are any of you guys married?
	Felix_Arabia - July 17, 2007 (03:08 PM) I feel like I'm married to EmP.
	carcinogen_crush - July 17, 2007 (03:16 PM) That counts; it does. I think you two are beautiful in your homo-eroticness.
	Teshon44 - August 23, 2007 (11:32 AM) ya
	Teshon44 - August 23, 2007 (11:35 AM) ya