This thread is in response to a review for Kasumi Ninja on the Jaguar. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: Vorty
Posted: February 19, 2023 (12:39 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Was going for a more succinct style here. not sure if it worked.
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: February 19, 2023 (02:37 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I think you probably told me everything I need to know about the game, in a lively style. I think it worked. I would have liked to see you double space between paragraphs, which helps with readability, but otherwise I would say it was golden. The game sounds terrible...
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Author: Vorty
Posted: February 20, 2023 (02:37 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks, Jason. Appreciate the feedback
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Author: dementedhut
Posted: February 20, 2023 (07:14 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I'll concur with Venter and say you've explained everything that needed to be said about the game. Never played it, but if I had a Jaguar, I wouldn't want it after reading the review. I guess if I had one "complaint," it would be the opening paragraph talking about the console itself before talking about the game. Personally, I think that would work better as a closing paragraph with some modification; like maybe in a "on a console that no one owns or remembers, so at least you were spared." type of dig.
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