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Author: honestgamer (Mod)
Posted: June 06, 2021 (12:43 AM)
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Your review's introduction was really strong and found a compelling way to describe the game's assets before dismantling them. Great stuff! I was most of the way through the text before I found the first sentence that needed some fixing. That would be this one: "After you've placed the bomb, you begin the process anew, trudging to another location where you do nothing but still there and stare off into space." I think "still" needs to be a different word, or is missing a word, but you say "hold still" shortly thereafter so you also would want to watch for repetition. I found two other minor points to address after that point, so I wouldn't be surprised if you started to check out right near the end. But whatever the case, this was an excellent review for a game I had never heard about, one that made me feel almost as if I have played it myself now.

"Too often we enjoy the comfort of opinion without the discomfort of thought." - John F. Kennedy on reality

"What if everything you see is more than what you see--the person next to you is a warrior and the space that appears empty is a secret door to another world? What if something appears that shouldn't? You either dismiss it, or you accept that there is much more to the world than you think. Perhaps it really is a doorway, and if you choose to go inside, you'll find many unexpected things." - Shigeru Miyamoto on secret doors to another world

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Author: JoeTheDestroyer (Mod)
Posted: June 06, 2021 (07:53 PM)
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Thank you. I meant to say "stand there and stare off into space." I think initially I wrote "stand still and..." and went to eliminate "still," but got rid of "stand" instead.

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