This thread is in response to a review for Infinite: Beyond the Mind on the PlayStation 4. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: March 21, 2021 (12:14 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
This could be so many indie games these days. Or even just so many games in general. They're competent and then some, but is there a lot of reason to play unless you've exhausted the classics they mimic and really love the genre? Maybe not. You did a great job reviewing this. Thanks!
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Author: dementedhut
Posted: March 21, 2021 (12:21 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Funny you should say that, because I actually brought up that subject in one of the original openings for the review; I eventually removed it because it was just taking away needless space from the actual game itself. Thanks for reading!
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: March 21, 2021 (02:33 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
That was probably the right call. There's nothing wrong with your scrapped text, except that it could be written just as easily about so many games and it detracts from the focus you wanted to place on the game actually being reviewed. That kind of discussion might also do a better job closer to the end of a review, because it's generally important to kick things off with immediate relevance. The further you get into a review without discussing the essential facts (such as the game's genre or your general thesis about its quality), the more you risk alienating all but the friendliest of readers. These are the sort of thoughts that keep me up at night. Anyway, good job with this review, as I said. Your instincts remain strong!
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Author: dementedhut
Posted: March 21, 2021 (05:15 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Yeah, it would've worked better as a closer; it's amazing how many opening paragraphs I've written that ultimately became closing paragraphs. Opening paragraphs are usually my toughest opponents when it comes to writing a review. Sometimes I'll go with a "message" or some kind of analysis/history lesson which actually has a chance of working with the game, and other times it becomes a jumbled mess by the second paragraph. When that happens, it's just best to get to the point with the very first sentence. Just go for it, even if it means you'll have a drastically smaller review on your hands; at least everything about the game, good and bad, was explained.
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