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Very nice review, Gary. Of course, the best part about it was the well-deserved Bloomer shout out. Anyway, some thoughts for nit-picky improvements:

"...awful Digital Pictures rerereleases and a really dodgy Doom, was Star Wars Arcade,"

I think there's an extra "re" in there, and also it might help the sentence to have a word after "Doom," like "title" or something along those lines.

Again, sweet review. You might well be in the running for RotW if Joe deems you worthy.

I don't have to prove I'm refined - that's what makes me refined!

Rererelease is on purpose. It'e a rerelease of a rerelease.

re.

The X and Y are struck through in the next bit. It might be that striking through a single character doesn't make that obvious enough. I'll play around with it. The rest are fair suggestions. I'll edit it as soon as my head is in the right place.

Thanks for reading! Not a lot of these left, now.

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