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Good review, Jason, of a game that I had requested myself, only to get a figurative hand in the face! Hmm...

Anyway, your review summed up nicely (and rather charitably) what I was afraid the game would be all along: a plain Jane Mega Man clone.

I found a few things that require your attention:

"WhileVintage Hero is disappointing in some respects, however, it does feature a soundtrack offering a selection of tunes..."

A missing space, and the "while"/"however"agreement seems a bit funky here.

"One of the game's more surprising strength is its plot..."

A missing "s."

Anyway, kudos on kicking things off for 2018.

I don't have to prove I'm refined - that's what makes me refined!

Thanks for catching those! I use Dragon NaturallySpeaking to write my reviews now (and have for the last few months, due to RSI issues), and sometimes the software makes errors of that sort that I wouldn't likely make if I were typing by hand. Spacing issues are common, and words that sound the same but are spelled differently (or are singular when they should be plural). I try to catch everything in edits, but sometimes I just don't.

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