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Posted: November 09, 2009 (10:45 PM)
Time can be cruel. The world; its future and the perception of those in it can change accordingly for better or worse, given time.

does it read awkwardly or is there a better way to restructure this sentence?

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wolfqueen001User: wolfqueen001
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Posted: November 09, 2009 (11:45 PM)
Given time, the world, its future and the perception of those in it can change for better or worse.
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jiggsUser: jiggs
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Posted: November 10, 2009 (12:36 AM)
thumbsup
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radicaldreamerUser: radicaldreamer
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Posted: November 10, 2009 (03:39 AM)
Comma instead of semicolon.
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