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I say, William, this review is simply marvelous, your best work yet! How do you do it?

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Oh, you are too kind, sir, too kind. While I am proud of this particular work, and I do appreciate your feedback, I would hardly call it my best.

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Don't be so modest, Will, this is good stuff.

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Why thanks, Will. It's always nice to get comments from people who read my reviews.

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Excellent review, Will. Easy to read and very informative.

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Thanks, nice to know my work is appreciated. :)

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Eh, this review was well-written, but it's not up to your usual standards. Could have been a little more detailed in parts, I think, like when talking about tactics in the middle bit.

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

I suppose. I tried to give as much detail as I could without bogging it down, but I didn't want to force it. Appreciate the honest feedback. ;)

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

lawl, dis review sux

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

...I suppose it's better to have bad feedback than no feedback at all.

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

Dude, why are you spending a whole topic talking to yourself?

"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one."
- Nero Wolfe

...Anyway.

The start of this doesn't sit nicely at all with me, I'm afraid. It's better than your original version that I talked about on the staff board, but your alteration manages to add a level of arrogance. "I gather it's a sequel but I don't care" - or whatever you wrote - just sounds like an admittance that you can't be bothered to research your material properly, and claiming that "a novel idea is still a novel idea" just doesn't seem to make much sense. How many times does that novel idea have to be repeated until that novelty wears off?

It's still a good review, though, having said all that.

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XD I love you, Will.

I told you I liked this review, though. Probably one of my favorites from you.

[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will