Forums > Submission Feedback > pickhut's Dead or Alive Xtreme 2 review

Good stuff dude. I quite enjoyed reading your sane take on this game, after hearing our resident crazy man Zig raving about it. =D

Got some issues with it though, that are easy enough to fix:

*looks at book self*

Should be "bookshelf."

It was hard, because they all looked the same, despite cosmetic differences.

This line could be money: cuz really, you were hard? But seriously, it's weird to say they looked the same despite cosmetic differences. It's cosmetic differences that would make things NOT look the same. Maybe plug the word "minor" or "negligible" before "cosmetic" and that reads better.

Both of which require almost little effort.

This line also doesn't make sense (though we of course, know what you mean). It's either "little effort" or "almost no effort".

Your final paragraph sums up your experience well, in scathing though humourous, fashion.

I don't have to prove I'm refined - that's what makes me refined!

Whoops, can't believe I didn't notice it was suppose to be bookshelf.

Went back and modified those areas you mentioned to make them sound more sensible. And thanks for the comments on the review.

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