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Author: Masters (Mod)
Posted: October 23, 2019 (07:39 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I wonder if anyone has taken the time to really read this? Some really arresting turns of phrase here. The opening is especially evocative. I think you hit the nail on the head with that, "captivatingly ugly" description.
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Author: EmP (Mod)
Posted: October 23, 2019 (09:46 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
That was where I ended on the first draft, but it didn't feel like an ending to me, so I just kept going a bit. I liked about half of the tacked on conclusion. The first half feels like a bit of a word soup.
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