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I know who you mean by "Bithell," but since you refer to him numerous times, you want to use his whole name the first time and reference one of his previous games. There are a lot of people who might read your review but not know who you mean. Also, in your final paragraph you say "this came amusingly broaches" but I think you mean "this game amusingly broaches" instead. Anyway, this review did a good job of looking into a game that I hadn't paid much attention to... though I did add the game listing, so I suppose that's something! ;-)

"Too often we enjoy the comfort of opinion without the discomfort of thought." - John F. Kennedy on reality

"What if everything you see is more than what you see--the person next to you is a warrior and the space that appears empty is a secret door to another world? What if something appears that shouldn't? You either dismiss it, or you accept that there is much more to the world than you think. Perhaps it really is a doorway, and if you choose to go inside, you'll find many unexpected things." - Shigeru Miyamoto on secret doors to another world2

Thanks again Jason. Whilst rereading my review, I "detected" an number of incongruities and fixed them. Quarantine Circular looks every bit as enthralling to me as this was. I'll be hunting down more narrative driven games in the future for my reviews ... 'cause this is totally my jam.

Look, the only time I'm not wrong is when I'm right, so...