This thread is in response to a review for Hyper Light Drifter on the PC. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: June 26, 2018 (09:06 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
This is one of your stronger reviews, though your last paragraph begins with "There is no denying that, objectively speaking..." which is false. Anyone can deny the claim the sentence's remainder makes, because it is subjective. You could chop those words and the sentence would still read strikingly, but without the contentious tone that detracts from its message.
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Author: Follow_Freeman
Posted: June 27, 2018 (08:13 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thank you, using your advice makes the article look much better know! I went ahead and did some rewording in those two paragraphs as well, and I think the article is better for it.
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