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Thanks for covering this. It's good to know that Ubisoft hasn't screwed the proverbial pooch this time. It's also nice to know that they've done something new and original rather than sticking with the same tired open world stuff that they normally bank on.

While I did give you some feedback on Steam already, I do have a criticism about the content itself now that I'm re-reading it again: The first paragraph feels like I'm jumping into the middle of the review rather than the beginning. You start off by telling us about ranks and reputations before we even know what this game is about. I think the second paragraph might've worked better as the introduction.

That aside, you do give us a more complete picture of what this game is about and how it works compared to some of your shorter pieces. The addition of personalized screenshots was also a welcome addition, particularly how they corresponded to what you were saying in the preceding and subsequent paragraphs, though I would've cropped them to be the same width for visual consistency (there are free tools you can use to do this, such as Paint.net or GIMP).

However, that's a minor gripe. I look forward to seeing what you submit next time around.

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