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I really, really liked this review, and I'm sad that I had to exclude it from ROTW. I thought your descrptions of the gameplay, mixed with your personal experiences, were really thoughtfully written. You also managed not to spoil anything important, which is always a plus.

You bounced in and out of the running in ROTW a few times as I was deliberating. Ultimately, my criticisms came down to the awkwardness of the first paragraph and how some of the punctuation could've been tighter. I don't know what else to say. I was buried by quality reviews this week and choices had to be made. However, if you keep outputting awesome reviews like this, you'll be hitting first place sooner rather than later.

placid like acid

Thanks Nightfire. Looking at the competition this week, I wasn't expecting much. This is just a bit of writing I did in one sitting because I was up late one night thinking about this game.

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