This thread is in response to a review for Trials Evolution on the Xbox 360. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: bbbmoney
Posted: May 02, 2012 (02:11 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Now, I never played the previous game, so I'm having trouble coming up with imagery from your review. I think that's fine, but I was just curious on how you typically approach sequels? Assume the reader has prior experience and go from there? I don't bring this up because I have a problem with the review, I'm just trying to learn how to approach reviewing sequels as well, and how many basic descriptors I can afford to leave out of the writing.
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Author: overdrive (Mod)
Posted: May 03, 2012 (12:00 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks for the comments, HTP. I added a couple assets to the review to help a bit and added a couple sentences describing the kinds of stuff on courses. And did some work with that sentence that you mentioned.
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