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Author: Masters (Mod)
Posted: November 07, 2011 (01:47 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Nice review Venter. You have me wanting to check this game out, especially if it's the most excited you've been about Sonic since Sonic 2...
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: November 07, 2011 (01:51 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks for reading, Marc, and you're right. I've cut a few words out of that final sentence and I think it reads better as a result. Also, you really should check out Sonic Colors. It's the Sonic game that a lot of fans have been waiting for but don't realize actually released a year ago. I still need to give Sonic Generations a shot.
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Author: Masters (Mod)
Posted: November 07, 2011 (01:55 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Much better.
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: November 07, 2011 (02:00 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Look at the "like clipping abound" portion of your second sentence. There's trouble with that sentence and that particular phrase is largely responsible. I'm not sure what fix to suggest, but it seems like you may have started to write two separate versions of the sentence and when you settled on one, it didn't quite get tweaked all the way. That's just my guess based on how most errors find their way into my own reviews. The reality may be quite different.
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Author: threetimes
Posted: November 07, 2011 (02:25 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Got my hopes up after reading this review, only to have them dashed after realising the game was on the Wii. Though I always loved Knuckles' levels in SA2.
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Author: Masters (Mod)
Posted: November 07, 2011 (02:25 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I double-checked the sentence and saw no error. Weird.
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Author: SamildanachEmrys
Posted: November 07, 2011 (03:28 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I double-checked the sentence and saw no error. Weird.
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Author: Masters (Mod)
Posted: November 07, 2011 (05:48 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I think "and had major graphical issues, like clipping abound" doesn't work as a sentence.
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Author: zippdementia
Posted: November 10, 2011 (10:44 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Not enough to get me to play another Sonic game, but I'm glad to hear all his little friends took the day off.
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