This thread is in response to a review for Trapped Dead on the Miscellaneous. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
Posted: September 01, 2011 (08:20 PM)
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Hm... Well, I have mixed felings about this review. While you do a good job describing everything, as you always do, much of the review's structure felt choppy and awkward. I think this has a lot to do with qualifying words like "often" and "seemingly". Sometimes these words are necessary to give weight to different aspects of the game, but other times they aren't necessary at all and just crowd things up. It's something I myself have been trying to work on.
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