This thread is in response to a review for Fist of the North Star: Ken's Rage on the PlayStation 3. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
Author: honestgamer (Mod)
Posted: June 26, 2011 (10:38 AM)
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This was a satisfying but brief review of an interesting game and shows (at least to me) that you have definite potential as a reviewer. I wouldn't have minded seeing you go into more detail on your most interesting points, perhaps with examples or further elaboration, because you did a good enough job that I wanted to hear more. Your grasp on grammar was for the most part good and your organization made sense. I hope that you stick around and continue reviewing and improving as a writer, because there's a lot to like here. Thanks for contributing!
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