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Author: EmP (Mod)
Posted: March 25, 2011 (11:56 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Venter, Game Dev Story
For us. For them. For you. |
Author: CoarseDragon
Posted: March 25, 2011 (12:29 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Congratulations to Josh on the win.
Age is a condition not a state of mind. |
Author: overdrive (Mod)
Posted: March 25, 2011 (01:26 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I like how the results are printed worst to first. It makes me think I placed pretty highly in this one!
I'm not afraid to die because I am invincible |
Author: wolfqueen001
Posted: March 25, 2011 (01:42 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
The pics I thought to put in because I thought they'd add more to the nothing bit of text I'd had written for the game to begin with. I thought they'd help supplement what I was talking about, rather than just be pointless throw ins. As far as I'm concerned, they do exactly what I intended them to do, really, because each one I put in was a very conscious decision.
[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will |
Author: WilltheGreat
Posted: March 25, 2011 (02:38 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
WQ: I would suggest floating the images, rather than wrapping the text next time. That'll solve the problem of weird-looking paragraphs.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one." |
Author: CoarseDragon
Posted: March 25, 2011 (03:01 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
WQ: I liked the screenshots in your review. I thought it was a little lacking in flow in some places. One paragraph Bob is crawling through air vents and next thing you know we are reading a comic then we get this "But however difficult dealing with it is, warping reality is often necessary." I lost what you were after there, the bees, the book or Bob or the whole thing. You had some good sections so don't think the whole thing was a bad read it was not. It was interesting I just had trouble following you a couple of times.
Age is a condition not a state of mind. |
Author: turducken
Posted: March 26, 2011 (02:30 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Heh, am I in retirement, Will? I like to think I'm just lazy.
"My father, the Emperor, had many powers of the Dark Side. But without three eyes he could never achieve perfection." - Trioculus |
Author: Felix_Arabia
Posted: March 26, 2011 (03:41 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Very entertaining judging results to read. I feel like I got to benefit from this competition without putting in actual work! Congrats to DOI on his win.
I don't have to boost my review resume because I have a real resume. |
Author: True
Posted: March 27, 2011 (04:49 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
On a different side note: Who's doing the next contest, if anyone?
If I Offended You, You Needed It. |
Author: JANUS2
Posted: March 28, 2011 (08:50 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks to the judges, especially Zigfried!
"fuck yeah oblivion" - Jihad |
Author: CoarseDragon
Posted: March 28, 2011 (11:50 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
turducken here is why I gave you a low score. This game was made on a shareware game making program. That to me means not "developed" but rather created using an existing software tool. Yes all game makers use tools to make games but just like "The Ball" I don't feel these games are true indie games unlike Breath of Death VII and others that were entirely created from scratch. Here are my sources: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barkley,_Shut_Up_and_Jam:_Gaiden
Age is a condition not a state of mind. |
Author: JoeTheDestroyer (Mod)
Posted: March 28, 2011 (03:14 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Haha! Move successful, intarwebs back.
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Author: turducken
Posted: March 28, 2011 (11:47 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
While I appreciate the explanation I was REALLY complaining, just light-hearted joshing or somesuch. I got third-place for a game I haven't played in like two years and wrote the review for a few hours before the submission deadline (hence mucho typos/grammar flubs). I can live with third. SOMEHOW...
"My father, the Emperor, had many powers of the Dark Side. But without three eyes he could never achieve perfection." - Trioculus |
Author: WilltheGreat
Posted: March 29, 2011 (11:01 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
This game was made on a shareware game making program. That to me means not "developed" but rather created using an existing software tool.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one." |
Author: CoarseDragon
Posted: March 29, 2011 (11:11 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Not as arbitrary as you might think. I put a lot of thought into what I thought was an Indie game. I gave EmP the same deduction for the same reason. Judges have to make these fundamental abstractions and be ready to back them up.
Age is a condition not a state of mind. |
Author: BLAH_Or_blah
Posted: March 30, 2011 (07:52 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Truth be told, not only did EmP enter for me, but also introduced the spelling errors.
No. |
Author: wolfqueen001
Posted: March 30, 2011 (08:25 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Haha. Blah; that makes it sound like EmP wrote your review for you. =/
[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will |
Author: BLAH_Or_blah
Posted: March 31, 2011 (01:07 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I'm actually an EmP alt.
No. |
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