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Author: Masters (Mod)
Posted: March 17, 2011 (12:04 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Hi there, and welcome! Your review shows off some very good writing, but I thought I might impart some friendly advice: try to make more/smaller paragraphs.
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Author: Halon
Posted: March 17, 2011 (09:31 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Yeah dude break up those paragraphs. I read it in ms word and broke the paragraphs up myself (actually broke the first one up into four separate paragraphs) and it read much smoother.
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Author: fleinn
Posted: March 18, 2011 (05:51 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
:) ..it's written in a clever text-editor that display the first line-break as a paragraph (Word, etc). So when copied, the breaks are two spaces, but the paragraphs will just be one newline. ..aah, the wonders of whitespace-trailing..
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Author: Zpardi
Posted: March 26, 2011 (03:55 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Hello, thanks for your advice, I'll keep that in mind for next time.
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