This thread is in response to a review for Quattro Adventure on the NES. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: CoarseDragon
Posted: March 03, 2011 (11:18 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Very strong and very funny start but you seemed to tail off that course somewhere in the middle of the review. I guess I expected the humor you infused to be present throughout considering the great start. Don't take it wrong it was a very good review and I did enjoy the read but I think maybe you could trim some. Perhaps it was "Robin" that felt a bit long to me.
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Author: JoeTheDestroyer (Mod)
Posted: March 04, 2011 (10:46 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks, CD! This is actually quite condensed from its original form (which was about 12 KB in the very first draft),but I'll see if I can shed anymore pieces of it.
The only thing my milkshake brings to the yard is a subpoena. |
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