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I'm...insulted that you would choose a game about cute, mindless, innocent creatures to try and bring about my demise in our death match. Though, I guess that's the whole point.

Seriously, though. I liked this one. Precise, to the point, focused. One thing: Once, Olimar accidentally lead some red Pikmin through water, not realising this would kill them;

Should be led, I think. Or leads. Either would work.

If I Die Young, May It Be Noble. If I Die Old, Let It Be Peaceful. And If I Am To Live Forever, Please Bless My Loved Ones With The Same Miracle.

Yep, that should be led. Thanks for spotting that. It survived three proof-reads of my own and I didn't even spot it. >_<

I can avoid death by not having a life.

You put emphasise but I think you meant empathize. To experience the feelings of another is to empathize.

Age is a condition not a state of mind.

Another good catch. Thank you!

These are the sort of things I'd spot if I were to read the review 2 weeks from now, I think.

I can avoid death by not having a life.