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Some nitpicky typos in an otherwise good review. I may have more after the TT results, which I'm not done with yet, and this won't affect my vote. I just wanted to write this up for RotW stuff and in case you wanted to proofread.

come crashing sown (sown->down)
pump led into gas trucks (led->lead)
are a bit too open than they should (too->more)

Alicia’s satanic magic + Alicia stands to exorcise the minions of SATAN = contradiction? She's not killing Satan with his own magic I think...

That's about it and it's not much.

My principal said, 'Emo, Emo, Emo.'
I said 'I'm the one in the middle, you lousy drunk!'
-- Emo Phillips

Alicia’s satanic magic + Alicia stands to exorcise the minions of SATAN = contradiction? She's not killing Satan with his own magic I think...

Not to nitpick your nitpick, but I think "Satanic" could refer to simply evil/demonic magick, not giving direct ownership of said magick.

And yes, it is spelled with a K.

If I Die Young, May It Be Noble. If I Die Old, Let It Be Peaceful. And If I Am To Live Forever, Please Bless My Loved Ones With The Same Miracle.

Thanks for pointing out the typos.

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