This thread is in response to a review for Gears of War on the Xbox 360. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: June 17, 2008 (01:49 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
You asked for critiques of your other work in your shameless forum topic, so I thought I'd step in and provide one. I'm pointing to pretty much every flaw I find all at once, which I hope won't be overwhelming since overall this was a good review and leads me to believe that you will go on to someday write some fantastic pieces if you keep at it. I hope that you will. Now on with my nitpicks...
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Author: dagoss
Posted: June 17, 2008 (02:58 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I wrote feedback before I saw that Honestgamer gave feedback. Now I feel redundant. You can have my feedback anyway though!
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Author: Muk1000
Posted: June 18, 2008 (12:34 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Yay! This is the kind of stuff I was hoping for.
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