Ads are gone. We're using Patreon to raise funds so we can grow. Please pledge support today!
Google+   Facebook button  Twitter button 
3DS | DS | PS3 | PS4 | PSP | VITA | WII | WIIU | X360 | XB1 | All

Forums > Submission Feedback > dandwreviews's Halo 3: ODST review

This thread is in response to an article about on the . You are encouraged to view the article in a new window before reading this thread.

Add a new post within this thread...

board icon
Author: Ben
Posted: July 09, 2010 (06:32 PM)
Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums...

Hey, Dan. I don't think I've seen you around before. I'm not sure how often you lurk around the site, but I hope you get to read this topic at some point.

I just finished reading two of your reviews -- one on Halo 3: ODST and one on Tales of Monkey Island: Chapter 3. What I particularly like about your style is that you don't dally on a point. You keep things concise, and get your thoughts across well.

I'm not sure if you're interested in seeing your work critiqued, so for now I'm just going to point out some spelling errors and typos in your ODST review. You confused than/then twice in the first paragraph, "superhero" is one word, you missed the "r" in "armour", and it's "dual wield" (not "duel").

I hope to see more stuff from you. If you want extended feedback, I'd be happy to give it to you. Just let me know.


...


board icon
Author: dandwreviews
Posted: September 09, 2010 (10:55 PM)
Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums...

Hey Ben. Just noticed this post. Thanks for the feedback! (I must have missed those things during the editing process). Nonetheless, I greatly appreciate you pointing these out. And I'll be sure to pass this post onto Daniel! If you're interested in providing further feedback to Daniel, you can shoot him an email - danielrichtmyre@dandwreviews.net. Thanks again for pointing out those mistakes to me.

William Mounts
Editor in Chief
(www.dandwreviews.net)
(williammounts@dandwreviews.net)


Not sure how to make a sig? While logged into your account, you can edit it and your other public and private information from the Settings page.


Site Policies & Ethics | Contact | Links

eXTReMe Tracker
© 1998-2014 HonestGamers
None of the material contained within this site may be reproduced in any conceivable fashion without permission from the author(s) of said material. This site is not sponsored or endorsed by Nintendo, Sega, Sony, Microsoft, or any other such party.Opinions expressed on this site do not necessarily represent the opinion of site staff or sponsors. Staff and freelance reviews are typically written based on time spent with a retail review copy or review key for the game that is provided by its publisher.