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Hm... I personally think this review is better for the niche who would actually appreciate it. While it's not as technical (especially with terminology and explanations of mechanics and the like) as your review of the console version, it's still a little too heavy for me to get completely into. That's not necessarily a bad thing; it just means it didn't do a whole lot for me, though I can say that I do get a good picture of what the game looks like. I am left wondering, though, that if this is basically the same as the console version (with perhaps even more features, as you mention patches), why you scored it slightly lower. That's just a curiosity thing more than anything else, though; I don't want to start an unnecessary debate about the relevancy of scores and the like.

Anyway, not too much wrong with this one (respectively speaking). Jerec made this sound like it was riddled with errors, though maybe you'd gone back and proofed since then.

There's a really long sentence that could use breaking up at the end of the second paragraph.

These planes can match your pace and aggression, aren’t afraid to pull off little stunts of their own to escape you ill intents

your

Their only goal is to blow you up before you do any damage to their convey.

convoy

Do some light damage to your targets and you’ll see their ability to fly differentiate radically

haha. While I guess that can work, "deteriorate" works much better.

Even the little details like machine gun recoil is undertaken with a sense of unbridled seriousness; a parked plane with its brakes off can fire a few rounds into nothing and find the kickback from it rolling their craft backwards slowly.

are ("details" is the subject here); that should just be "the" - you never really say the plane belongs to someone.

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[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will