This thread is in response to a review for Split/Second on the PlayStation 3. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
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Author: honestgamer
Posted: June 13, 2010 (09:40 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
This was a good review and I'd be interested in seeing you submit more. I liked your conversational tone, which I thought you handled well, though there were some places where you digressed a bit much or where it felt like the organization could have used a bit of work. Some tightening and focus would have made this a fantastic read, but as it was I still learned a lot about how the game works and you did a good job of homing in on those points that most deserved focus. Thanks for contributing!
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Author: fleinn
Posted: June 13, 2010 (12:23 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
"Players who pick up Split/Second and demand a plot, character development, or any sort of customization system are to be disappointed, but it’s only their fault."
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Author: aschultz
Posted: June 15, 2010 (05:40 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I agree that this is a good review, first attempt or not. I'm one of the people who write "review of the week" here, and you got my week, so I will try to give more in depth comments. Hopefully they're helpful to you. I don't know how much editorial advice you want. Here's a good place to post if you want it toned down, etc. Overall, good job. I just love to try to hammer on the obvious details that might help someone figure out more stuff they want to do. I find it's practice for my own writing, which may or may not need it even more.
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