This thread is in response to a review for Alan Wake on the Xbox 360. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
Posted: May 23, 2010 (08:22 PM)
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This review needs some proofreading: "afore-mentioned" and "right trigger right trigger" offhand. I also noticed some unnecessary commas and wordy constructions that give the writing a lulling rhythmic quality ("After Wake first finds himself in the darkness of the woods, he returns to it over the course of those first three episodes") -- something to be mindful of in the future.
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