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Author: fleinn
Posted: April 25, 2010 (08:08 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
"Making tasks like these mandatory opens up Just Cause 2’s world while simultaneously indulges in the sort of entertainment that this sub-genre was built upon in the first place.
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Author: radicaldreamer
Posted: April 25, 2010 (02:22 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
"Where breadth, substance, actual content is concerned..."
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Author: Suskie
Posted: April 25, 2010 (09:21 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Yeesh, this review really needed some tightening up -- I was tired last night when I subbed it so I didn't even bother to proofread it until now. Laziness never pays off.
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Author: fleinn
Posted: April 25, 2010 (10:36 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
No, no, serious. English isn't my first language, so I may not react to sentences that bend grammatical rules, if the sentences still sound right (..that's basically how grammars work in Norwegian :D). And the sentences in this review sound right.
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Author: Suskie
Posted: April 25, 2010 (11:59 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Ah, okay -- I wasn't sure what you meant, since just looking at the excerpt, that bit looked hastily inserted to me. But then again I've never been a particularly good judge of my own work.
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Author: fleinn
Posted: April 26, 2010 (12:23 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Really? lol. No, now that I read it again, you could probably turn the sentence around a bit, so the meaning would be more clear and straight forward. But the rhythm is just right.
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