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Author: EmP (Mod)
Posted: April 11, 2010 (06:46 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
There's a few typos and misplaced words in here. I'll point this one out becuase the others can be overlooked with ease:
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Author: Felix_Arabia
Posted: April 11, 2010 (07:01 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks, EmP! The typo has been mended, and I made a slight alteration to the power hierarchy that you mentioned, so hopefully it makes a little more sense now. I appreciate it.
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Author: zippdementia
Posted: April 11, 2010 (12:11 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I also liked the review, but there's a typo in the elephant sentence that I couldn't overlook with ease. Go back and check that out. Something about a rat "an" scare the elephant.
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Author: Felix_Arabia
Posted: April 11, 2010 (03:29 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Fix one issue by creating another! That's what happens when you make quick edits and don't look to see how they fit into what was already there. Thanks, Zipp, for noting that and reading the review.
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Author: randxian
Posted: April 15, 2010 (07:19 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
You do a good job of striking an emotional chord with us SNES fans. It's sad to see that one of the last installments on this console is such a letdown.
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Author: aschultz
Posted: April 21, 2010 (09:13 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Perfectionist critiquey stuff.
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Author: Felix_Arabia
Posted: April 21, 2010 (02:43 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks Schultz for the unexpected, in-depth analysis. I really don't agree with any of it, as I'm very pleased with how the review turned out, and I think your suggestions are rather nit-picky and irrelevant . . . but I nevertheless appreciate your desire to pitch in!
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